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Run for the Hills: First Draft by fredwardness, literature

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Run for the Hills: First Draft

Before: "Women are wretched. Women are evil. That is why they all died out. Repeat." Our childlike voices mimicked his words. I could hear my voice over the others; even then it was a strong and firm sound. "We are a better race, a superior race. Women were only good for one thing," the Leader paused to smirk. We all giggled with him, even though none of us had the slightest idea what he was talking about. None of us had even seen a woman before. "Ethan, what are we?" the Leader asked me. He always asked me questions because I always had the answers he wanted to hear. They were the answers that got me so high up into the ranks, w

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Run for the Hills: First Draft by fredwardness, literature

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Run for the Hills: First Draft

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Just an artist trying to improve. Haven't posted recently and hoping to change that, my style has changed quite a bit, but at least it has changed for the better.

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Coraline

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Bones, How I Met Your Mother

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Florence + the Machine, The Beatles, The Killers, Ben Folds, Queen, Green Day, The Cranberries, Vivaldi, +more

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The Blue Girl, Harry Potter series, The Knife of Never Letting Go, The Ask and Answer, Monsters of Men, Anthem, The Hunger Games Trilogy, The Giver, Gathering Blue, Messenger, The Silent Boy, +so many more

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Patrick Ness, J.K. Rowling, Lois Lowry

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Drawing, Writing, Reading, Rollerblading, Forensics, Acting, and Singing in the Shower

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fredwardness

Jan 3, 2012

Dystopian Rough Draft #1

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**Authors Note: Please notice that this is my first draft. It is nowhere near perfect. I'm posting in hopes of ideas for new stuff, what should stay and what needs to go. Also, with this being the first draft not everything is going to make sense. I know there are inconsistencies. If something confuses you bring it up in the comments, I will either explain or fix it. You will notice that sometimes I will stop abruptly and go with a new thought. That is mostly where I'm trying to fill more story in and then polish. Sorry for any confusion, please enjoy. Before: "Women are wretched. Women are evil. That is why they all died out. Repeat." Ou

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Apr 17, 2011

The Moon Maiden

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Dawn rose Her golden hair lighting the sky And she caressed the Earth In her fiery finger tips Painting color onto every Tree and flower Whose color had been bleached By the Moon All the glassy-eyed marionette puppets Were brought back to life Dancing in the light Their eyes shone From their mistress' warm glow The puppets kneeled before The rising sun Smiling and full of joy A feeling so different Than the cold fear the Moon brought The Darkness That was when Twilight, the setting sun Dropped her marionettes Left them strewn about carelessly And the shimmering Moon came out of hiding The Moon Lady smiled down sadly